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S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the Union

Abbey's Speech Compromise Obsession Erupts Over Uncashed Activist Check

In the President's bedroom, Abbey obsessively rewinds and replays the State of the Union speech's bipartisan plea for a Blue Ribbon Commission, her fixation betraying alarm at softened ideological edges clashing with her activist fire. Charlie interrupts with Mrs. Landingham's note about Abbey's uncashed $500 check to battered wife Jane Robinson, unleashing Abbey's explosive fury at presidential bureaucracy—'how long has that been up his ass?!' Charlie, forewarned and unflappable, vows to resolve it, refocusing Abbey amid her private frustrations that foreshadow deeper marital and policy rifts beneath the SOTU triumph.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Abbey Bartlet obsessively rewinds and replays a segment of President Bartlet's speech, focusing on the bipartisan commission announcement, revealing her deep concern over the softened language on entitlements.

concern to frustration ["The President's Bedroom"]

Charlie Young interrupts Abbey's private moment, initially discussing mundane matters before revealing the uncashed $500 check to Jane Robinson, exposing Abbey's personal activism.

casual to intense ["The President's Bedroom"]

Abbey erupts with anger upon learning about the uncashed check, revealing her personal connection to Jane Robinson's domestic violence case and her frustration with bureaucratic delays.

anger to determination ["The President's Bedroom"]

Charlie promises to investigate the uncashed check, providing a moment of resolution before Abbey returns to her obsessive speech review, demonstrating her unresolved political concerns.

determination to preoccupation ["The President's Bedroom"]

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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C.J. Cregg
primary

Embarrassed by mishap (implied off-screen)

Casually referenced by Charlie in light banter as having sat in wet paint, providing momentary levity before the check revelation.

Goals in this moment
  • N/A (not present)
Active beliefs
  • N/A (not present)
Character traits
clumsy
Follow C.J. Cregg's journey

Calm and professionally detached, laced with cautious deference to avert explosion

Knocks and enters cautiously, pre-warns Abbey of his vulnerability without protection gear, delivers Landingham's note on uncashed check with precise details, collaboratively recounts Jane's story, pledges swift resolution, and exits rapidly to defuse tension.

Goals in this moment
  • Convey check message without inciting backlash
  • Commit to resolving the check delivery immediately
Active beliefs
  • Direct intervention smooths First Family frictions
  • His reliability maintains executive sanctuary
Character traits
unflappable diplomatic efficient poised
Follow Charlie Young's journey

Intensely obsessed with speech betrayals, erupting into righteous fury at bureaucratic neglect masking deeper activist anguish

Stands fixated on rewinding and replaying SOTU speech segments on TV, abruptly shuts it off for Charlie's entry, banters lightly about C.J.'s paint mishap, erupts in fury over the uncashed check, vividly recalls Jane Robinson's abuse story, thanks Charlie tersely, then sits on bed resuming TV playback.

Goals in this moment
  • Scrutinize and critique speech dilutions on women's issues
  • Ensure immediate delivery of aid to Jane Robinson
Active beliefs
  • Presidential compromises erode core progressive values
  • Personal compassion must override White House inertia
Character traits
obsessive principled volatile passionate
Follow Abigail Bartlet's journey

Traumatized survivor (recalled)

Invoked through shared recounting of her abuse ordeal—husband setting fire to bed, ruining kids' early Christmas presents—prompting Abbey's protective fury over the stalled check.

Goals in this moment
  • N/A (not present)
Active beliefs
  • N/A (not present)
Character traits
resilient victim of violence
Follow Jane Robinson's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Abbey's $500 Uncashed Check to Cash for Jane Robinson

Central trigger as uncashed $500 lifeline to Jane Robinson, relayed via Landingham's note through Charlie; its bureaucratic entrapment in President's possession unleashes Abbey's volcanic activist rage, crystallizing VAWA stakes and marital-policy tensions beneath SOTU veneer.

Before: Uncashed, lodged in presidential records/bureaucracy
After: Still uncashed but flagged for Charlie's expedited delivery
Before: Uncashed, lodged in presidential records/bureaucracy
After: Still uncashed but flagged for Charlie's expedited delivery
President's Bedroom Television (State of the Union Replay)

Serves as focal point for Abbey's obsessive dissection of SOTU speech, repeatedly rewound to bipartisan commission segment betraying her ideological alarms; powered off during intrusion for privacy, reactivated post-exit to sustain her unraveling fixation on policy fractures amid personal rifts.

Before: Actively playing rewound SOTU speech tape in bedroom
After: Resumed playback of Blue Ribbon Commission segment on …
Before: Actively playing rewound SOTU speech tape in bedroom
After: Resumed playback of Blue Ribbon Commission segment on bed

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Sculpture Garden

Fleetingly invoked in Charlie's banter about C.J.'s wet paint pratfall, injecting wry West Wing humor to ease into grave check discussion, contrasting public gaffes with private presidential sanctum's heavier burdens.

Atmosphere Comic relief via recalled chaos
Function Anecdotal backdrop for tension break
Fresh wet paint on sculptures Recent renovation hazards

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Thematic Parallel medium

"Bartlet's prayerful moment with Charlie and Abbey's obsessive replay of the speech segment both reveal underlying tensions between public appearances and private anxieties."

Locking the Softened SOTU Speech and Presidential Handover
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Thematic Parallel medium

"Bartlet's prayerful moment with Charlie and Abbey's obsessive replay of the speech segment both reveal underlying tensions between public appearances and private anxieties."

Bartlet's Nervous Ritual and Regal Entrance
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What this causes 2
Character Continuity

"Abbey's initial replay of the speech segment foreshadows her later confrontation with Bartlet about the omission of the Violence Against Women Act, revealing her deep personal investment."

Abbey Confronts Bartlet Over VAWA Omission in Tense Kitchen Clash
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Character Continuity

"Abbey's initial replay of the speech segment foreshadows her later confrontation with Bartlet about the omission of the Violence Against Women Act, revealing her deep personal investment."

Charlie's Summons Forces Abbey's Professional Pivot
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Key Dialogue

"CHARLIE: "Ma'am, I'd like you to bear in mind that I'm not wearing pads, or a helmet or contact gear of any kind. A $500 check that hasn't been cashed.""
"ABBEY: "Oh, how long has that been up his ass?!""
"ABBEY: "Her name is Jane Robinson. I read an article about her a few months ago." / CHARLIE: "Her husband threw her out..." / ABBEY: "He set fire to the bed." / CHARLIE: "And she bought the kids Christmas presents early and they were ruined." / ABBEY: "So I sent her $500.""