Donna Forces Josh Into Hip‑Waders
Plot Beats
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Donna forces Josh to sober up with strong coffee and foul weather gear.
Josh reacts poorly to the old coffee, spilling it down his shirt.
Donna insists Josh change clothes before his meeting.
Josh reluctantly agrees to change into the hip-waders.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Disoriented and annoyed on the surface; embarrassed and vulnerable underneath, trying to maintain control through protest and humor.
Josh is groggy and half‑awake, accepts the cup, gags on the strong coffee which spills down his front, expresses resistance to wearing the hip‑waders, then reluctantly begins to change when pressed; he uses humor to deflect embarrassment.
- • Avoid the humiliation of the hip‑waders and preserve personal dignity.
- • Wake up sufficiently to handle the incoming meeting while minimizing effort and disruption.
- • Personal appearance matters for professional credibility, so being forced into silly gear is degrading.
- • Donna will manage logistics and he can rely on her to get him ready; he need only comply begrudgingly.
Controlled urgency: exasperated at Josh's disarray but calmly authoritative, masking any deeper anxiety about the broader crisis by focusing on immediate logistics.
Donna enters carrying bright yellow hip‑waders and a cup of coffee, places both on Josh's desk, issues curt commands, leaves, then returns to reinforce urgency and force action — she is the practical engine of the beat.
- • Wake Josh and force him to prepare for the incoming visitor.
- • Resolve the wardrobe problem quickly by mobilizing a cleaning solution and getting Josh changed.
- • Immediate, practical fixes will prevent small problems from derailing larger political work.
- • She is responsible for making sure Josh is presentable and on time; institutional friction must be neutralized by her action.
Zuzu does not appear onstage but is invoked by Donna as the quick‑turnaround cleaner who will fix Josh's stained clothes …
Objects Involved
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A plain ceramic coffee cup is carried by Donna, set on Josh's desk, and used as a literal wake‑up tool: the very strong brew is ordered drained by Josh, causing him to gag and spill coffee down his front. The cup functions as catalyst (wakes him), comedic prop (gag/spill), and plot device (creates need for cleaning).
Josh's undershirt (and by extension his outer shirt) is affected when coffee runs down the front of his shirt, creating a visible stain and wetness that triggers the logistics discussion about cleaners and immediate wardrobe change. The garment thereby converts a comic beat into a tangible obstacle requiring resolution.
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Key Dialogue
"DONNA: "It's Sam's foul weather gear. Drink this.""
"DONNA: "Change your clothes.""
"JOSH: "I'm not wearing that.""