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S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the Union

Bartlet's Nervous Ritual and Regal Entrance

In the tense Capitol hallway, as Toby and Sam finalize the speech and phone it to the prompter, Bartlet pauses vulnerably to tie his shoelace amid the approaching entourage. Toby hands him the leather portfolio; he shakes hands with staff amid applause, masking nerves. Bowing his head in a quiet prayer crossed with Charlie for strength, he politely requests Speaker Finney, who announces his arrival to thunderous chamber applause. Senior staff—Sam, Toby, Leo—watch in proud awe, this threshold moment humanizing Bartlet's vulnerability while catapulting toward the high-stakes State of the Union, bridging prep anxiety to public triumph.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Bartlet pauses to tie his shoe, revealing visible nerves as Toby solemnly delivers the leather-bound speech portfolio.

confidence to vulnerability

Bartlet shares a prayerful moment with Charlie before requesting Speaker Finney, steeling himself for the imminent address.

anxiety to determination ['chamber entrance']

Finney announces Bartlet's arrival to thunderous applause, leaving senior staff momentarily awestruck by the weight of the moment.

anticipation to solemn pride ['House chamber threshold']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Calm reassurance anchoring shared solemnity

Greets arriving Bartlet formally with 'Mr. President' as entourage passes, joins intimately in prayer bowing head and responding 'Amen' after President's cross, stands by during Finney exchange.

Goals in this moment
  • Affirm President's presence and spiritual resolve
  • Participate in pre-address ritual for collective strength
Active beliefs
  • Prayerful unity steels Bartlet against performance anxiety
  • Protocol and faith bridge personal vulnerability to public duty
Character traits
Poised Supportive Devoutly loyal
Follow Charlie Young's journey

Heightened focus amid operational pressure

Receives locked speech copy from Sam immediately after finalization, walks purposefully down the hallway pausing amid entourage passage to speak urgently into cell phone relaying revisions to prompter operator.

Goals in this moment
  • Transmit speech revisions instantaneously to prompter
  • Avoid any delay in entourage momentum
Active beliefs
  • Timely dispatch ensures speech integrity under live scrutiny
  • Subordinate speed sustains senior staff's command rhythm
Character traits
Efficient Precise Deferential
Follow Toby's Office …'s journey

Institutional dignity

Invoked by Bartlet's polite request via Finney to be seen, enabling formal announcement and chamber protocol activation leading to applause.

Goals in this moment
  • Uphold House decorum for SOTU
  • Facilitate presidential address
Active beliefs
  • Speaker's permission gates executive pageantry
  • Ceremonial precision amplifies national moment
Character traits
Authoritative Protocol-bound
Follow Speaker of …'s journey

Focused intensity blending affirmation with underlying nervousness turning to proud resolve

Collaborates intently hunched over counter affirming Toby's 'entrenchment' phrasing with 'Yeah' and 'Okay', hands locked speech copy swiftly to staffer, shakes Bartlet's hand amid hallway applause, shares nervous glance with Toby and Leo during shoelace moment, stands proudly with them as President enters chamber.

Goals in this moment
  • Confirm and dispatch flawless speech copy to prompter for seamless delivery
  • Convey unwavering team solidarity to steady Bartlet's nerves
Active beliefs
  • Refined speech language captures the administration's ideological evolution
  • Quiet staff presence humanizes and empowers the President's high-stakes moment
Character traits
Collaborative Affirming Principled Anxiously supportive
Follow Sam Seaborn's journey

Tense urgency yielding to profound relief, shadowed by anxious pride

Hunched urgently over counter finalizing speech phrasing with Sam, sighs in raw relief twice, instructs staffer crisply to phone revisions to prompter, calls out 'Mr. President' supportively, hands leather portfolio directly to Bartlet, shakes his hand amid applause, glances nervously with Sam and Leo, then stands proudly as Bartlet enters chamber.

Goals in this moment
  • Finalize and secure delivery of the pivotal SOTU speech revisions
  • Bolster President's composure through direct support and handover
Active beliefs
  • Precise rhetoric like 'ideological entrenchment' will enable Bartlet's moderating triumph
  • Personal rituals and staff solidarity fortify executive vulnerability
Character traits
Determined Relieved Loyal Nervous vigilance
Follow Toby Ziegler's journey

Formal poise in ceremonial duty

Stands solemnly as elderly gentleman at chamber entrance, nods and addresses Bartlet deferentially with 'Sir', receives polite request to summon Speaker, turns and enters chamber, announces via VO 'Mr. Speaker... The President of the United States' triggering applause and gavel amid crowd murmur.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute House protocol for presidential entry
  • Bridge executive request to legislative summons
Active beliefs
  • Tradition sanctifies the State of the Union ritual
  • Doorkeeper's voice commands chamber reverence
Character traits
Ritualistic Authoritative Courteous
Follow Edgar Finney's journey

nervous and vulnerable

stoops to tie shoelace amid entourage passage, receives leather portfolio from Toby, shakes hands with Toby and Sam, walks with group amid applause while hiding nervousness, nods to Finney, bows head in prayer crossing himself and saying 'Amen', requests Mr. Finney tell the Speaker he'd like to see him, enters chamber after announcement

Goals in this moment
  • pause for vulnerable ritual of tying shoelace and prayer with Charlie for strength amid nerves
  • transition composed to chamber entrance
Character traits
protective resolute self-aware principled
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Sam's Locked Copy of the State of the Union Speech

Sam hands this locked SOTU copy—etched with 'abandoning our ideological entrenchment'—directly to staffer post-finalization, propelling revisions toward prompter; it embodies frantic collaborative triumph, bridging writers' urgency to live delivery in hallway tension.

Before: Held by Sam after counter edits
After: Transferred to Toby's Office Staffer for phone relay
Before: Held by Sam after counter edits
After: Transferred to Toby's Office Staffer for phone relay
Staffer's Cell Phone

Staffer pauses mid-hallway to speak into this cell phone, relaying Toby/Sam revisions verbatim to prompter operator as entourage passes; it serves as vital conduit, compressing deadline panic into digital precision amid surging momentum.

Before: Pocketed or held by staffer
After: Actively used pressed to ear for transmission
Before: Pocketed or held by staffer
After: Actively used pressed to ear for transmission
Toby's Leather Portfolio

Toby thrusts this supple leather portfolio—bulging with identical locked SOTU pages—into Bartlet's grasp post-shoelace, steadying nerves; it symbolizes finalized rhetoric's weight, transitioning from prep artifact to presidential talisman amid handshakes and applause.

Before: Held by Toby post-edits
After: Gripped by Bartlet entering chamber
Before: Held by Toby post-edits
After: Gripped by Bartlet entering chamber
House Chamber Prompter

Target of staffer's cell phone relay for Toby/Sam revisions like 'ideological entrenchment,' priming screens for Bartlet's sightline; it lurks as unseen lifeline, ensuring moderated words ignite precisely as vulnerability yields to command.

Before: Receiving prior drafts remotely
After: Updated with final locked revisions
Before: Receiving prior drafts remotely
After: Updated with final locked revisions
Capitol Hallway Counter

Toby and Sam hunch over this scarred hallway counter slashing final phrasing amid sighs, absorbing collaborative frenzy; it grounds the razor-edge prep, contrasting intellectual labor with Bartlet's physical stoop nearby.

Before: Empty work surface in hallway
After: Abandoned post-edits, marked by urgency
Before: Empty work surface in hallway
After: Abandoned post-edits, marked by urgency

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Capitol Building Hallway

Dimly lit night hallway pulses with counter edits, staffer relay, entourage surge, shoelace vulnerability, handshakes, and applause echoes; it crystallizes transition from shadowed prep frenzy to chamber threshold, amplifying human stakes before spectacle.

Atmosphere Taut shadows thick with nervous anticipation and relieved sighs
Function Preparatory corridor for final handoffs and ritual buildup
Symbolism Liminal space humanizing power's raw nerves
Access Restricted to presidential entourage and key staff
Fluorescent glare on counter and phone Distant crowd murmurs and gavel echoes Tight passage forcing intimate proximity
Entrance to the Chambers

Elderly Finney stands sentinel here for nod and 'Sir' exchange, prayer bow, Speaker request; it frames vulnerable pause before entry, heightening ritual tension as staff watches Bartlet cross alone into roar.

Atmosphere Solemn hush pierced by prayer and impending thunder
Function Threshold gateway enforcing protocol separation
Symbolism Portal forging private dread into public regality
Access Entourage halts; President enters solo post-announcement
Gloom swallowing figures Proximal chamber door hum Static elder gentleman presence
House Chamber

Finney enters to bang gavel amid murmurs, VO-announcing President detonating applause; Bartlet strides in alone, staff left proudly watching; it erupts as destination spectacle, swallowing vulnerability in acclamation wave.

Atmosphere Electrified swell of crowd roar and wood vibrations
Function Stage for SOTU joint session climax
Symbolism Heart of democratic theater and national unity
Access Congressional chamber; President granted entry via protocol
Thunderous applause spilling back Gavel crack authority Restless joint session hum

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

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Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

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Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

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Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

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What this causes 1
Thematic Parallel medium

"Bartlet's prayerful moment with Charlie and Abbey's obsessive replay of the speech segment both reveal underlying tensions between public appearances and private anxieties."

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Key Dialogue

"TOBY: "Mr. President.""
"BARTLET: "Thanks.""
"BARTLET: "(crossing himself) Amen.""
"CHARLIE: "Amen.""
"BARTLET: "Mr. Finney, would you tell the Speaker I'd like to see him please?""
"FINNEY: "(VO) Mr. Speaker... The President of the United States.""