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S4E23 · Twenty-Five
S4E23
· Twenty-Five

Ransom Fax — Zoey Held; Bartlet Orders the 5th Fleet

A quick, brutal escalation: forensic results confirm Zoey was drugged with GHB, turning a disappearance into a deliberate abduction. Leo hands Bartlet a faxed Polaroid and a translated ransom that demands the release of named prisoners and a U.S. withdrawal from Qumar — language that echoes recent Bahji rhetoric. Military and civilian advisors clash: Fitzwallace presses for strikes, Nancy warns of escalation, and Leo spits cold realism about revenge. Struck by the personal and geopolitical stakes, Bartlet orders the 5th Fleet into the Gulf — a calibrated show of force that converts a private nightmare into a full national-security crisis.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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President Bartlet confirms Zoey has been drugged with GHB, indicating a calculated abduction.

urgency to dread ['Oval Office']

The team examines a faxed photo of Zoey and learns the kidnappers demand the release of specific prisoners and U.S. withdrawal from Qumar.

shock to tension ['Oval Office']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Uzma Kalil
primary

Unknown; treated as an object of negotiation rather than an active participant.

Named in the ransom translation as one of the prisoners whose release is demanded; mentioned as a geopolitical lever in the kidnappers' demands.

Goals in this moment
  • (As a named detainee) Survive incarceration
  • Potentially be a bargaining chip in diplomatic negotiations
Active beliefs
  • Their release is being viewed by kidnappers as politically consequential
  • Mention in the note ties them to Bahji/ideological networks
Character traits
symbolic politically valuable
Follow Uzma Kalil's journey

Unknown; present in conversation only as a named object of the ransom.

Named in the ransom translation as a demanded prisoner release, invoked to ratchet up diplomatic stakes in the kidnappers' demands.

Goals in this moment
  • Remain alive while incarcerated
  • Be a possible subject of diplomatic negotiation if leverage is applied
Active beliefs
  • Being named connects their detention to broader regional agitators
  • Their freedom is actionable political currency
Character traits
leveraged political
Follow Ahmed Mansour's journey

Unknown; invoked as negotiating currency rather than an actor.

Also listed in the ransom demand; functions as part of the trio whose release is tied to the kidnappers' political objectives.

Goals in this moment
  • Remain alive under imprisonment
  • Possibly be released if political concessions are made
Active beliefs
  • Named detainees are strategic assets for militants
  • Their mention will force international calculation
Character traits
instrumental politically salient
Follow Barmak Essa's journey
Boy
primary

Incapacitated in the moment; his impending awakening frames the investigators' next move and the family's hope.

Referenced as the drugged companion who is expected to regain consciousness in roughly an hour—his condition anchors Nancy's caution and the urgency of investigative leads.

Goals in this moment
  • Regain consciousness and provide witness information
  • Survive the ordeal and assist investigators once able
Active beliefs
  • If conscious, he can identify the dealer and details
  • He is a critical link between street-level elements and the broader plot
Character traits
vulnerable passive evidentiary
Follow Boy's journey

Unknown (off-screen); characterized in-room as implicated and potentially culpable.

Named in Leo's account as the renter of the minivan traced to Kinko's footage; presented as a central investigative lead though not physically present in the room.

Goals in this moment
  • (Implicated actor) Remain unlocated or evade capture
  • Investigative focus will attempt to connect him to the kidnapping
Active beliefs
  • Being named in surveillance increases likelihood of detection
  • Flight or concealment is preferable to capture
Character traits
implicated unknown suspect
Follow Shahab Kaleel's journey

Aggressive and impatient; sees force as the primary, timely remedy to terror threats.

Urgently advocates military options—listing C-130s, Blackhawks and a carrier group's movement and target list—pushing for immediate, kinetic measures to degrade the adversary.

Goals in this moment
  • Position military assets quickly to neutralize Bahji capabilities
  • Signal U.S. resolve and deter further attacks
Active beliefs
  • Swift, decisive military action reduces future risk and punishes perpetrators
  • Delay gives the enemy space to exploit the situation
Character traits
hawkish commanding single-minded
Follow Percy Fitzwallace's journey

Concerned and controlled—personal worry contained beneath duty-bound reporting.

Greets the President at the door, briefs him on forensic results and victim condition, and stands as the professional conduit between field findings and Oval-level decisions.

Goals in this moment
  • Relay accurate, timely information about the victims and crime scene
  • Keep operational channels open so investigative leads can proceed quickly
Active beliefs
  • Precise, factual briefings reduce speculation and help command decisions
  • The Secret Service must protect the President's ability to lead despite personal involvement
Character traits
steady professional fact-focused
Follow Ron Butterfield …'s journey

Tense, worried, on the verge of panic though striving to remain composed in the President's presence.

Accompanies the President into the Oval Office, listens to the forensic report and ransom translation, and stands visibly anxious—his personal stake (romantic link) makes him tense and urgent.

Goals in this moment
  • See that Zoey is found and kept safe
  • Support the President while attempting to influence any decisions toward immediate rescue
Active beliefs
  • Every minute matters in a kidnapping—action must be urgent
  • Personal connections should not exclude him from contributing to the search
Character traits
loyal viscerally anxious protective
Follow Charlie Young's journey

Concerned and prudent; anxious about unintended escalation but motivated to preserve long-term stability.

Argues for analytic restraint and warns moving forces into position will escalate the situation; highlights the investigatory chance to catch the drug dealer alive and prevent broader fallout.

Goals in this moment
  • Avoid immediate escalation that could make the hostage situation worse
  • Preserve investigative conditions to capture perpetrators and recover the victim
Active beliefs
  • Escalation has predictable, adverse consequences that must be anticipated
  • Law enforcement leads (finding the dealer) can yield non-military resolutions
Character traits
cautious analytical procedural
Follow Nancy McNally's journey

Anguished and private grief sharpened into resolute, somber determination; grief does not paralyze but clarifies the stakes.

Reads forensic findings and the translated ransom, absorbs the personal blow of the photograph, weighs competing counsel, and delivers the order to move the 5th Fleet—converting private anguish into executive action.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure Zoey's safe return by using every available lever
  • Protect national security and avoid precipitous mistakes while responding forcefully
Active beliefs
  • Personal losses cannot justify unchecked retaliation but require strong responses
  • Visible military posture can deter further harm while preserving options
Character traits
gravely composed decisive paternally wounded
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

Grimly resolute; bitter about likely violence but focused on practical next steps.

Hands the President the fax and translation, frames intelligence context about origins and precedents, and supplies the blunt operational realism that hardens the room's urgency.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide the President with clear, actionable facts to inform decision-making
  • Prevent emotional improvisation from dictating dangerous policy choices
Active beliefs
  • Hard facts will corral the room into disciplined action
  • Delay or equivocation risks both the girl's safety and national credibility
Character traits
pragmatic eloquently blunt anchoring
Follow Leo McGarry's journey
Analysts
primary

Clinically detached, focused on imparting the precise forensic picture to enable decisive action.

Delivers the toxicology result aloud—identifying the sedative and its contaminants—framing the medical reality that this was chemical incapacitation rather than accidental harm.

Goals in this moment
  • Communicate accurate forensic information to guide law enforcement and medical response
  • Ensure decision-makers understand the severity and intentionality implied by the toxicology
Active beliefs
  • Objective forensic data should drive the political and military response
  • Detail about the drug and contaminants will shape investigative leads
Character traits
clinical detail-oriented unsentimental
Follow Analysts's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Faxed Polaroid of Zoey Bartlet

A fax-quality Polaroid of Zoey arrives with the ransom: it is handed to the President and visually confirms the victim's condition, providing the visceral, personal anchor for the policy debate.

Before: Transmitted from a Kinko's self-serve machine and received …
After: In the President's hands and on the Oval …
Before: Transmitted from a Kinko's self-serve machine and received at the White House fax line.
After: In the President's hands and on the Oval Office desk as primary evidence compelling action.
Translation of Zoey's Ransom Note

The translated ransom note is presented alongside the photograph; it articulates political demands (prisoner releases, U.S. withdrawal from Qumar) that convert the incident into a geopolitical ultimatum.

Before: Translated by analysts/linguists and prepared for briefing.
After: Placed before the President and circulated in the …
Before: Translated by analysts/linguists and prepared for briefing.
After: Placed before the President and circulated in the room as the operative demand driving options assessment.
Partial License Plate (Minivan)

A partial license plate captured on camera is cited as the clue that links a rented minivan to Shahab Kaleel; it provides the tangible investigative lead mentioned in the briefing.

Before: Recorded on Kinko's camera footage, awaiting analysis.
After: Identified as partial plate characters and used to …
Before: Recorded on Kinko's camera footage, awaiting analysis.
After: Identified as partial plate characters and used to generate an FBI APB described in the Oval Office.
Partial Kinko's Security Camera Footage

Partial Kinko's security camera footage is referenced as the source of a partial license plate that yields a lead; it anchors the investigative thread to Dover and a rented minivan.

Before: Held at the Kinko's location and provided to …
After: Referenced in the Oval Office briefing and incorporated …
Before: Held at the Kinko's location and provided to investigators on request.
After: Referenced in the Oval Office briefing and incorporated into an FBI APB.
Victim's GHB Blood Test Results

The victim's GHB blood test results are the concrete laboratory evidence announced in the briefing; they convert speculation into medical fact and escalate the policy conversation.

Before: Completed by lab and awaiting delivery to the …
After: Read and integrated into the Oval Office briefing, …
Before: Completed by lab and awaiting delivery to the President and security team.
After: Read and integrated into the Oval Office briefing, referenced by multiple advisers.
Abductors' GHB Sedative

The sedative (GHB) is identified in toxicology as the agent used to incapacitate Zoey and the boy; the forensic revelation proves intent and frames the crime as an abduction rather than a disappearance.

Before: Samples taken and sent to lab; analysis pending.
After: Toxicology results delivered in the Oval Office and …
Before: Samples taken and sent to lab; analysis pending.
After: Toxicology results delivered in the Oval Office and cited as definitive evidence of deliberate chemical incapacitation.
Degreasing Solvent Mixed with Drain Cleaner

The forensic detail that the GHB was contaminated with degreasing solvent mixed with drain cleaner is reported, suggesting a clumsy or improvised drug delivery and adding forensic trace leads for investigators.

Before: Contained in lab report; not yet disclosed to …
After: Revealed aloud in the Oval Office, sharpening investigators' …
Before: Contained in lab report; not yet disclosed to senior staff.
After: Revealed aloud in the Oval Office, sharpening investigators' hypotheses about supplier and method.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Arabian Gulf

The Arabian Gulf is named as the destination for the 5th Fleet's movement; it becomes the immediate theater for show-of-force positioning and potential strikes referenced by military advisers.

Atmosphere Strategically charged and tense—naval gray against an uncertain horizon, where posturing can escalate quickly.
Function Operational area for naval deployment and deterrent signaling.
Symbolism Represents the levers of American power and the thin line between deterrence and escalation.
Access International waters and littorals regulated by military protocols and diplomatic notice.
Naval movement: carriers and warships cutting through sea lanes The gulf as a staging area for C-130s, Blackhawks and carrier groups
Oval Office

The Oval Office is the scene of the high-stakes briefing: forensic results, the faxed Polaroid and the translated ransom are presented here, turning a family crisis into an executive, national-security decision.

Atmosphere Tension-filled, hushed urgency with the private weight of grief under institutional formality.
Function Command briefing room and decision stage where the President weighs counsel and issues orders.
Symbolism Embodies institutional power forced to absorb private pain; the presidency as both father and commander-in-chief.
Access Restricted to senior staff, security detail, and immediate advisers; heavily controlled.
Nighttime lighting, small pool of desk light and desk papers Fax and translation physically on the President's desk Quiet, the sound of footsteps and low-voiced advisories
Islamabad Maximum-Security Prison

Islamabad's maximum-security prison is invoked in the ransom's demands as the facility holding the three named prisoners—its mention raises diplomatic and geopolitical stakes for any response.

Atmosphere Remote, fortified, and ominously immovable in political terms—its walls are leverage in the kidnappers' calculus.
Function Referenced bargaining object and the location to which the ransom conditions point.
Symbolism Represents the external geopolitical friction that transforms a domestic crime into an international crisis.
Access Highly restricted; release would require international negotiation and legal processes.
High concrete walls and reinforced gates (evoked in the briefing) Imagined distance between detainees and Washington's ability to act
Dover

Dover is the geographic origin of the Kinko's self-serve from which the ransom fax was sent; its footage yields the partial license-plate lead linking the crime to a rented minivan.

Atmosphere Implied mundane suburban normalcy made sinister by being repurposed as an instrument of terror.
Function Point of origin for the ransom transmission and a source of investigative evidence.
Symbolism Shows how ordinary commercial spaces can be co-opted into international crises.
Access Public-access business; footage obtained by law enforcement under warrant or request.
Security camera capturing a partial license plate A public fax machine used for anonymous transmission

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Bahji Cell

The Bahji cell is the implied antagonist whose rhetoric and past operations inform analysts' assessment; the ransom phrasing echoes their language, connecting the kidnapping to that network's tactics.

Representation Indirectly, through analysts' intelligence linking phrasing and past incidents, and through Fitzwallace's targeting recommendations.
Power Dynamics Non-state adversary exerting asymmetric leverage over state actors by converting a kidnapping into a political …
Impact Illustrates how transnational militant networks can shape superpower policy and provoke rapid military and diplomatic …
Internal Dynamics Not directly visible in scene; implied coordination of rhetoric and operational cells driving the kidnapping …
Exploit Zoey's kidnapping to secure political/prisoner concessions Undermine U.S. presence in Qumar by leveraging international attention Propagating ideological rhetoric (Mufti's call) that shapes demands Employing kidnapping and terror tactics to force concessions
U.S. Fifth Fleet

The U.S. Fifth Fleet is the military instrument the President orders into the Gulf; its movement serves as a calibrated show of force intended to deter Bahji and signal willingness to act.

Representation By the President's explicit order to reposition naval assets; manifested through command-and-control channels to the …
Power Dynamics Executes presidential direction while representing U.S. military escalation options; exerts regional influence through presence.
Impact Shows civilian control of the military and the use of posture as policy, but also …
Internal Dynamics Must rapidly mobilize under political direction while balancing operational readiness and rules of engagement.
Demonstrate U.S. resolve and deter further attacks Provide a forward posture enabling rapid military response if authorized Deployment of ships and carrier strike capabilities Projection of military presence to influence adversary behavior
Federal Bureau of Investigation

The FBI is the investigative engine referenced: it issued an APB on the rented minivan, is tracing the Kinko's footage and will lead the effort to locate the dealer and suspects tied to the abduction.

Representation Via investigative briefings and the APB described by Leo and Butterfield.
Power Dynamics Operates under White House direction but with law-enforcement autonomy; provides actionable leads to policy-makers.
Impact Reinforces the FBI's role as the nation's primary criminal investigative body and the necessary complement …
Internal Dynamics Balancing speed of action with evidence preservation; coordinating with Secret Service and local law enforcement.
Identify and apprehend the kidnappers and the drug dealer Gather forensic and surveillance evidence to support prosecution Operational resources and field agents (APBs, evidence collection) Legal authority to search, detain and coordinate with local jurisdictions
Washington Carrier Group

The Washington carrier group is cited by Fitzwallace as a strike-capable asset to be moved into the gulf; it stands as a concrete tool for the proposed kinetic response.

Representation Through the military adviser (Admiral Fitzwallace) requesting its redeployment and use.
Power Dynamics A potent instrument under military command, responsive to the joint chiefs and presidential orders; its …
Impact Demonstrates the practical reach of U.S. naval power and the consequential nature of moving such …
Internal Dynamics Operational readiness constraints and the need to coordinate timing with diplomatic/legal considerations.
Be positioned to conduct strikes against Bahji targets if directed Support regional deterrence and protect U.S. interests and forces Concentration of airpower and carrier-launched strikes Operational range and sustainment supporting prolonged operations
Kinko's

Kinko's is the commercial service used as the anonymous transmission point for the faxed photo and ransom; its security footage provides a crucial lead tying the transmission to a rented minivan.

Representation Through the existence of security-camera footage and the self-serve fax machine used by the kidnappers.
Power Dynamics A neutral commercial entity that becomes evidentiary and operationally important to law enforcement efforts.
Impact Shows how everyday businesses can be inadvertently implicated in geopolitical crises and become material sources …
Internal Dynamics Likely internal compliance processes and cooperation with authorities, though not detailed in the scene.
Comply with law enforcement requests for footage and records Preserve business continuity while cooperating with investigations Provision of surveillance footage and transactional records Physical infrastructure enabling anonymous transmission

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Key Dialogue

"RON: "They found GHB. Gamma hydroxybutyrate.""
"LEO (reading translation): "Release Uzma Kalil, Ahmed Mansour and Barmak Essa from the Islamabad maximum-security prison. The President will announce on television that the United States will abandon its military presence in Qumar.""
"PRESIDENT BARTLET: "Move the 5th Fleet into the gulf.""