Charlie Coaches Orlando to Cast His First Vote
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Charlie quizzes Orlando about the voting materials, showing concern and support for his comprehension.
Orlando asserts his confidence in his football skills, shifting the conversation from voting to his athletic future.
Orlando enters the voting booth, marking a transition from preparation to action.
Orlando announces he voted but jokingly suggests voting again, prompting Charlie to intervene.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Amused and affectionate; uses humor to defuse anxiety and celebrate his friend's steadiness.
Anthony stands in the line offering supporting commentary about Orlando's character and interjects the comic goat anecdote, lightening tension and reinforcing camaraderie while praising Orlando's competence.
- • Support Orlando emotionally and socially.
- • Use levity to reduce tension and keep the group relaxed.
- • Frame Orlando as competent to others present.
- • Humor is an effective way to deflect embarrassment and build solidarity.
- • Shared stories (even foolish ones) bind friends and humanize the moment.
- • Praising a friend publicly protects them from ridicule.
Calm, responsible, quietly proud — a caretaker balancing authority and encouragement to make voting feel ordinary rather than intimidating.
Charlie stands in line with two younger friends, confirms Orlando read the ballot information, reassures him permission to ask for help, prompts him forward, and physically/verbally stops him when Orlando tries to re-enter the process.
- • Ensure Orlando successfully casts a valid ballot without embarrassment.
- • Normalize the civic process for someone nervous about voting.
- • Protect Orlando from making an avoidable error (like trying to vote twice) that would make him feel foolish.
- • Voting is a simple, learnable civic duty that anyone can perform with a bit of guidance.
- • Shielding friends from public humiliation preserves dignity and builds trust.
- • Practical support matters more than lectures in moments of anxiety.
Nervous concentration mixed with a proud, performative toughness; eager to belong but anxious about looking foolish.
Orlando listens to Charlie's instructions, enters the curtained booth to mark his ballot, returns announcing he voted, then impulsively says he intends to 'go again,' signaling uncertainty about the process and a blend of nerves and bravado.
- • Successfully cast his ballot and be seen as competent.
- • Avoid embarrassment in front of his friends.
- • Demonstrate that voting is another thing he can do well — like on the football field.
- • He should be able to handle adult responsibilities even if he feels unsure.
- • Friend approval matters; looking foolish would be shameful.
- • Physical courage (football) should translate to confidence in other areas.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
Orlando's stolen goat is invoked as a comic anecdote by Anthony and questioned by Charlie. The goat functions purely as a narrative prop: a ridiculous, humanizing detail that undercuts the formality of voting and cements the friends' rapport.
The Cheetos are named as the snack Anthony fed the goat for three days — an absurd sensory detail that punctuates the moment with specific, comic imagery and ties the story to the characters' playful intimacy.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The precinct/polling place provides the public, civic backdrop for the exchange: a neutral, slightly anxious space where private mentorship and small rituals of citizenship unfold. It frames the friends' interaction as a civic rite rather than merely casual banter.
The curtained polling booth is the immediate locus of action: it offers privacy for Orlando to mark his ballot, creates a brief physical separation that heightens the moment's intimacy, and then serves as the trigger for Charlie's corrective intervention when Orlando tries to repeat the act.
Organizations Involved
Institutional presence and influence
The University of Michigan appears as an aspirational benchmark in conversation — a larger, prestigious opponent referenced to frame Orlando's athletic future and to minimize the importance of a local game.
St. Erasmus Academy is invoked conversationally as Orlando's immediate weekend opponent; the school functions as a local touchstone that situates Orlando socially and athletically, giving texture to his identity in the scene.
Penn State is named alongside Michigan to amplify the idea that Orlando's Saturday opponent is insignificant relative to the big collegiate stage he aspires to — it operates as conversational scaffolding for character identity.
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Key Dialogue
"CHARLIE: Listen, this is easy. You can do it, no problem, but if you need to, you can ask for help. You're allowed."
"ORLANDO: Hey, Mr. Young-- I'm not being disrespectful or nothing but I'm just trying to concentrate."
"ORLANDO: Hey, Anthony. I voted. CHARLIE: All right. ORLANDO: I'm going again. CHARLIE: No, no, no, no."