Josh's Visceral PTSD Breakdown: Fist Through Window
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Josh, overwhelmed by flashbacks, smashes his fist through a window in his apartment, breaking glass.
The Superintendent knocks urgently on Josh's door, calling out his name and asking if he’s okay.
Josh stares blankly at his bleeding hand, unresponsive to the Superintendent’s knocks.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Urgently concerned, alarmed by signs of distress
Vigorously knocking on Josh's apartment door off-screen, self-identifying as 'your Super' and repeatedly calling out to check on his welfare immediately after hearing or witnessing the window smash, bridging Josh's isolation with external concern.
- • Confirm Josh's safety and well-being
- • Gain response or access to assist if needed
- • Josh is in immediate danger or harm inside
- • As building superintendent, he holds responsibility for tenant protection
Narrative Connections
How this event relates to others in the story
"Josh's initial irritation with music escalates to violent physical manifestation of trauma when he smashes his hand through a window."
"Josh's initial irritation with music escalates to violent physical manifestation of trauma when he smashes his hand through a window."
Key Dialogue
"SUPERINTENDENT: "Mr. Lyman? It's your Super. [knocks] Mr. Lyman, are you okay in there?""
"SUPERINTENDENT: "Mr. Lyman!""