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Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

When the Enterprise transports a deaf mediator with a unique communication method to negotiate peace on a war-torn planet, his sudden loss of translating technology forces him to rediscover his true mediating power.

The USS Enterprise is sent on a diplomatic mission to transport the famed mediator Riva to negotiate peace between warring factions on Solais Five. Riva communicates through a chorus of three interpreters representing different facets of his personality, making him a uniquely effective mediator. During the mission, the device that allows Riva to communicate with his chorus fails, leaving him unable to speak or mediate. Riva is devastated, as his entire identity and effectiveness rely on this method of communication. Captain Picard and the crew attempt various solutions, including teaching Riva sign language and trying to repair the device, but Riva initially resists, feeling that without his chorus, he cannot effectively mediate. The situation becomes dire as the warring factions grow impatient, threatening to resume hostilities. Through Picard's encouragement, Riva ultimately realizes that he can turn his disadvantage into an advantage by teaching the warring factions sign language, thus integrating the learning process into the peace negotiations themselves. This innovative approach not only restores Riva's confidence but also fosters mutual understanding between the factions, setting the stage for lasting peace. The episode concludes with the Enterprise departing Solais Five, leaving Riva to his mission, and reflecting on themes of communication, resilience, and the value of embracing one's uniqueness.


Events in This Episode

The narrative beats that drive the story

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Act 0

The Enterprise, under Captain Picard's command, diverts to the Ramatis star system. Picard, initially relishing a 'transportation only' mission, leads an away team to meet the famed mediator Riva. Riker expresses concern over Picard's direct involvement in a potentially sensitive mission, but Picard dismisses it as a 'ceremonial function,' confident in a smooth encounter. The crew discusses Riva's long absence from mediation, hoping he remains at the top of his game. The away team, including Picard, Troi, and Worf, beams down to Ramatis. They arrive in an antechamber, guided by a young boy, who then mysteriously disappears, leaving them alone in a large, empty, geometrically designed room, building an immediate sense of intrigue and anticipation around the mysterious mediator.

Scene 1
Celestial Mechanics & Diplomatic Mechanics

Captain Picard records a log entry framing the Enterprise's diversion to Ramatis as a simple transport mission, his voice tinged with professional contentment at the straightforward assignment. This veneer of …

Transporter Room Five 9 characters 8 connections
Riker Commands the Bridge as Picard Prepares for Diplomatic Mission

With the Enterprise arriving at Ramatis Three, Commander Riker assumes command of the bridge, ordering a reduction to half impulse which Wesley Crusher confirms. The scene establishes Riker's authoritative yet …

Transporter Room Five 10 characters 8 connections
Private Doubts and Planetary Puzzles

Captain Picard summons Riker into the Ready Room under the pretense of discussing an astronomical anomaly—a clever narrative feint that reveals their unspoken anxieties about the upcoming peacekeeping mission. Their …

Captain's Ready Room 2 characters 8 connections
Celestial Puzzle & Diplomatic Arrival

Captain Picard shares a captivating holographic display of an impossible planetary orbit with Riker, revealing his scientific curiosity beneath the diplomatic veneer of their mission. Their rapid-fire theorizing—a rare moment …

Transporter Room Five 8 characters 8 connections
Ceremonial Shift to Diplomatic Focus

As the Enterprise arrives at Ramatis Three, Riker reports their arrival to Picard, who is engrossed in a scientific anomaly. Picard's abrupt shift from abstract scientific curiosity to disciplined diplomatic …

Transporter Room Five 5 characters 8 connections
Orbital Arrival and Diplomatic Preparations

The Enterprise assumes standard orbit around Ramatis Three as Picard and Riker transition from their scientific diversion to mission readiness. Riker commands the bridge with practiced efficiency, reducing impulse power …

Transporter Room Five 5 characters 8 connections
Ceremonial Command

Captain Picard and Commander Riker engage in a subtle but revealing clash of command philosophies aboard the Enterprise as they prepare to greet mediator Riva. Their exchange—masked as casual discussion—exposes …

Enterprise Turbolift 2 characters 8 connections
Ceremonial Departure to Ramatis

As the Enterprise assumes orbit around Ramatis Three, Captain Picard and Commander Riker engage in a subtle clash of command philosophies. Picard, fresh from solving an astrophysical puzzle, dismisses Riker's …

Transporter Room Five 5 characters 8 connections
Scene 2
Riva's Ceremonial Revelation

The away team witnesses a mystifying assembly as Riva's Chorus emerges with ritual precision, each member embodying distinct facets of Riva's personality. Riva himself arrives with commanding presence, immediately locking …

Solais Five 7 characters 23 connections
Ceremonial Welcome and Flirtations

Riva, the deaf mediator, makes a commanding entrance with his Chorus, who function as his voice and emotional conduits. The Warrior/Adonis member of the Chorus directs flirtatious attention toward Counselor …

Solais Five 6 characters 23 connections
The Chorus' Revelation: Unmasking Riva's Deafness

In a pivotal moment of cultural and interpersonal revelation, Captain Picard and the away team discover that mediator Riva is deaf, with his Chorus serving as conduits for both his …

Solais Five 7 characters 23 connections
Riva's Commanding Presence

The away team encounters Riva and his Chorus on Ramatis, where Riva's unique communication method is revealed. The Chorus, consisting of the Scholar/Artist, Warrior/Adonis, and a Cultured Woman, each embody …

Solais Five 6 characters 23 connections
Chorus Unveils Riva's Multifaceted Nature

The Enterprise away team encounters Riva and his Chorus in a carefully orchestrated introduction that reveals the mediator's unique communication method. Riva's Chorus—comprising a Scholar/Artist, Warrior/Adonis, and Cultured Woman—embodies different …

Solais Five 5 characters 23 connections
Riva Commits to the Solais Mission

Captain Picard and the Enterprise away team meet the renowned mediator Riva on Ramatis, discovering his unique communication method through his Chorus—three individuals who convey his words and emotional intent. …

Solais Five 6 characters 23 connections
Act 1

On Ramatis, humanoids slowly assemble, their quiet murmurs filling the vast room. Riva, the esteemed mediator, finally enters, his presence commanding, his gaze intensely assessing Picard and then warmly flirting with Troi. The Chorus, three distinct archetypes—the Scholar/Artist, the Warrior/Adonis, and the Cultured Woman—gather before Riva. The profound truth emerges: Riva is deaf, and the Chorus serves as his voice, his emotional intent, his very essence. Picard grapples with this astounding revelation, his curiosity piqued by this ancient, harmonious communication method. Riva, through his Chorus, asserts his authority, demanding direct address, subtly challenging Picard's inadvertent breach of protocol. The Chorus explains their ancestral role, their attunement to Riva's 'hands,' and Riva's ability to read lips. The Warrior/Adonis openly flirts with Troi, intensifying the personal stakes. With the mission's urgency pressing, Riva agrees to depart immediately, bringing his entire Chorus aboard the Enterprise, setting the stage for an unprecedented diplomatic journey where the very act of communication becomes a central mystery.

Act 2

Aboard the Enterprise, the ship stretches into warp, hurtling towards Solais Five. Riva and his Chorus are introduced to the bridge crew, sparking Riker's surprise at the mediator's deafness. A profound connection ignites between Riva and Geordi La Forge, both 'special' individuals relying on external aids for sensory input, forging an immediate kinship over their shared experience of uniqueness. Riva's confidence borders on arrogance as he dismisses the detailed briefing on the Solari wars, declaring the conflict's specific issues irrelevant, asserting that the basis for peace must be personal. He boasts an unbroken record of success, his self-assurance radiating. The romantic tension between Riva and Troi escalates, culminating in a private dinner where the Warrior/Adonis, Riva's 'libido,' steps away, leaving Troi and Riva alone. In a moment of raw intimacy, Riva begins to teach Troi sign language, their hands dancing, bridging the gap between them. This fragile peace shatters as the Enterprise arrives at Solais Five; laser fire erupts, breaking the cease-fire. Riva, seizing control, commands the viewscreen, his powerful presence alone enough to halt the hostilities, demonstrating his formidable influence and setting the stage for the ground meeting.

Act 3

Riva, his Chorus, Riker, and Worf beam down to the desolate, battle-scarred mountain top on Solais Five, a war zone. Riva, radiating supreme confidence, directs the setup of the meeting site, calling for torches and a rock table, meticulously crafting the environment for negotiations. As the fearsome Solari factions arrive, the air crackles with palpable tension, each group eyeing the other with suspicion, weapons at the ready. Riva, through his Chorus, attempts to calm the volatile atmosphere, commending their courage and wisdom. He begins to speak of the deep-seated hatred that fuels their conflict, but mid-sentence, the Scholar/Artist, Riva's intellectual voice, suddenly freezes, his face contorting in confusion. Riva himself is visibly stunned, a deep, unsettling wrongness gripping him. The soldiers, sensing the shift, instinctively scatter for cover, suspicion turning to outright hostility. Riker, without hesitation, orders an immediate beam-out, narrowly escaping renewed conflict. Back on the Enterprise, the devastating truth emerges: Riva's communication device has failed, rendering him completely mute and his Chorus useless. Riva is consumed by panic and despair, his entire identity and purpose shattered. Picard and his crew scramble for solutions, but Riva, stripped of his voice, loses all belief in himself, his once unshakeable confidence utterly destroyed, leaving the fate of Solais Five hanging precariously in the balance.

Act 4

On the Main Bridge, Captain Picard's log echoes the escalating military activity on Solais Five, a grim testament to Riva's continued silence. Data, a beacon of logical efficiency, plunges into the study of various sign languages, rapidly mastering five distinct forms, his hands flying with increasing speed. Meanwhile, in Sickbay, Pulaski confirms the crushing reality: no medical solution exists for Riva's condition, his brain unable to process auditory information. Troi, observing Riva's profound despair, recognizes his surrender to hopelessness. In Main Engineering, Geordi, despite his own visual impairment, struggles to repair Riva's unique device, finding no answers, deepening Riva's anguish. Riva, overwhelmed, buries his face in his hands, a silent testament to his utter defeat. Troi confides in Picard that Riva's confidence, a self-generated force, cannot be simply bestowed. Picard, in a calculated gamble, confronts Riva, attempting to provoke a reaction. He accuses Riva of being a 'fake,' of hiding behind his Chorus, a direct challenge to his core identity. This sharp, angry provocation finally pierces Riva's despair, sparking a flicker of his former fire. Picard, sensing the shift, then pivots, appealing to Riva's reputation, his unique ability to help others express themselves, to 'turn a disadvantage into an advantage.' This profound insight ignites a spark of realization in Riva, a dawning understanding that transforms his despair into a renewed sense of purpose, setting the stage for an audacious new approach.

Act 5

With newfound purpose, Riva, accompanied by Picard and Data, beams down to the desolate Solari mountain top. Riva, his confidence fully restored, immediately directs the relighting of the torches and the placement of the table, reclaiming his role as mediator. He reveals his audacious, brilliant plan: he will teach the warring Solari factions sign language. This act of shared learning, he explains through Data's interpretation, will become the very foundation of their peace, forcing them to communicate not just with him, but with each other, fostering mutual understanding where only hatred once existed. Picard grasps the profound wisdom in this approach, recognizing that the time spent learning will be 'time well spent,' forging a deeper connection than any traditional negotiation. Riva, now resolute and alone, sits at the table, a solitary figure awaiting the arrival of the factions, embodying the power of vulnerability transformed into strength. The Enterprise departs, leaving Riva to his unique mission. Back on the ship, Picard shares a poignant moment with Geordi, reinforcing the episode's central theme: true uniqueness stems not from one's 'special' condition or the technology that aids it, but from simply being oneself. Geordi, inspired, considers an operation to restore his sight, a powerful echo of Riva's journey, highlighting the choice to embrace or alter one's identity. The Enterprise sets a new course, the crew's knowing smiles reflecting the profound lessons learned about communication, resilience, and the extraordinary power found within one's authentic self.