Hermack Orders LIZ 79’s Destruction
Plot Beats
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Major Warne reports to General Hermack that Milo Clancey evaded capture by jamming his controls with an anti-missile device. Warne's radar and sonar are out of action, hindering the pursuit, and he requests immediate assistance.
Madeleine enters, delivering shipping and production figures, then questions the General about a problem. Hermack reveals Clancey's escape and requests the exclusive use of the video channel.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Furious and impatient, with a simmering rage beneath his professional demeanor. His emotional state is one of righteous indignation, fueled by Clancey’s evasion and Warne’s perceived incompetence.
General Hermack dominates the scene, his frustration boiling over into a zero-tolerance stance. He berates Major Warne for failing to track Clancey, seizes control of Madeleine Issigri’s video channel, and orders the deployment of the full minnow fleet to destroy the LIZ 79. His body language and tone are aggressive, reflecting his refusal to tolerate further defiance. The order is delivered with cold finality, signaling the end of Clancey’s chances.
- • Eliminate Milo Clancey as a threat to Space Corps operations and argonite shipping lanes.
- • Reassert control over the situation and restore the Space Corps’ dominance in the sector.
- • Clancey’s defiance is a direct challenge to the Space Corps’ authority and must be crushed.
- • Mercy or hesitation will only embolden further piracy and endanger vital shipping routes.
Unseen but implied to be defiant and determined, likely aware of the escalating threat but focused on survival and evasion.
Milo Clancey is indirectly referenced as the target of General Hermack’s lethal order. His use of the anti-missile device to evade capture is confirmed, and his ship, the LIZ 79, is now marked for destruction. Though physically absent, his defiance looms over the scene, driving Hermack’s escalation and the deployment of the minnow fleet.
- • Evade capture by the Space Corps at all costs.
- • Protect his ship and livelihood from destruction.
- • The Space Corps is an overbearing, bureaucratic force that unfairly targets independent operators like him.
- • His technical skills and countermeasures are his best defense against pursuit.
Focused and unyielding, with no visible hesitation or doubt. Their emotional state is one of cold professionalism, fully committed to carrying out Hermack’s orders without question.
The Minnow Fighter Pilots are deployed by Penn under Hermack’s order to locate and destroy the LIZ 79. Though not physically present in the scene, their launch is confirmed by Hermack, and their role as the executioners of his order is implicit. Their presence looms over the scene, representing the lethal force now unleashed against Clancey.
- • Locate and destroy the *LIZ 79* as ordered by General Hermack.
- • Ensure the successful completion of the mission with minimal collateral damage.
- • Their duty is to enforce the Space Corps’ authority and eliminate threats to argonite shipping lanes.
- • Clancey’s evasion is a direct challenge to their mission, and his destruction is justified.
Neutral but slightly curious, with an undercurrent of tension as she becomes aware of the military escalation. Her emotional state is one of calculated restraint, balancing corporate interests with the need to cooperate with the Space Corps.
Madeleine Issigri enters the office during the crisis, initially focused on her corporate duties. She hands over shipping times and production figures to her secretary, instructing them to be sent via transprinter. Her demeanor is calm and composed, but she is clearly unaware of the escalation regarding Clancey until Hermack informs her. She allows Hermack to use her video channel without objection, her compliance subtle but significant, reinforcing the corporate-military alliance.
- • Maintain smooth operations for Issigri Mining Corporation amid the military crisis.
- • Avoid direct conflict with General Hermack while subtly asserting her corporate authority.
- • The Space Corps’ pursuit of Clancey is a distraction from her primary responsibilities, but she cannot afford to openly oppose them.
- • Her sympathy for Clancey is personal, but corporate survival must come first.
Frustrated and stressed, with a sense of helplessness as his ship’s systems fail and Clancey slips away. He is clearly embarrassed by the failure and eager to rectify the situation.
Major Warne appears on the video monitor, his transmission garbled by interference. He reports that Clancey used an anti-missile device to jam his controls, rendering his ship’s radar and sonar inoperable. Warne is visibly stressed, requesting immediate assistance. His demeanor is professional but strained, reflecting the failure of his mission and the urgency of the situation.
- • Regain control of his ship’s systems and resume the pursuit of Clancey.
- • Avoid further reprimand from General Hermack and restore his professional standing.
- • Clancey’s evasion is a direct result of his own failure to anticipate the anti-missile device.
- • The Space Corps’ protocols must be followed, even in the face of unexpected technical countermeasures.
The Issigri Mining Secretary accompanies Madeleine Issigri into the office but remains silent and unobtrusive. She does not speak or …
Objects Involved
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The Issigri Mining Office Military Video Monitor serves as the critical communication hub during this event. It displays General Hermack’s remote directives and Major Warne’s garbled transmission, which confirms Clancey’s use of an anti-missile device. Hermack seizes control of the monitor to issue his order to Penn, turning it into a tool for escalating the military response. The monitor symbolizes the fusion of corporate and military interests, as Madeleine Issigri’s office becomes a command center for the hunt.
The LIZ 79 is the primary target of Hermack’s order, marked for destruction after Clancey’s use of the anti-missile device. Though not physically present in the scene, its fate is sealed by Hermack’s command, and the minnow fleet is deployed to hunt it down. The LIZ 79 symbolizes Clancey’s defiance and independence, but it is now a doomed vessel, with the Doctor, Jamie, and Zoe unwittingly aboard. Its destruction would not only eliminate Clancey but also endanger his passengers, raising the emotional stakes of the conflict.
Milo Clancey’s Anti-Missile Device is the catalyst for this event’s escalation. Though not physically present, its use is confirmed by Major Warne’s garbled transmission, revealing that it jammed Warne’s ship controls and rendered his radar and sonar inoperable. This device embodies Clancey’s defiance and technical prowess, forcing Hermack to escalate the pursuit. Its deployment marks a turning point, as Hermack realizes that Clancey cannot be tracked or captured through conventional means, necessitating a lethal response.
The Minnow Fleet is deployed under Hermack’s direct order to locate and destroy the LIZ 79. Though not physically present in the scene, their launch is confirmed by Hermack, and their role as the executioners of his order is central to the event’s escalation. The fleet represents the full force of the Space Corps’ retaliation, transforming the pursuit into a zero-sum hunt. Their deployment signals the end of Clancey’s chances and raises the stakes for the Doctor, Jamie, and Zoe, who remain unaware of the lethal threat now bearing down on them.
Location Details
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The Issigri Mining Office serves as the epicenter of this event, functioning as both a corporate command center and a military hub. Madeleine Issigri’s office, typically used for managing argonite shipping and production, is repurposed as a space for Hermack to issue his lethal orders. The office’s cluttered desks and screens, usually filled with mining data, now display Hermack’s directives and the garbled transmission from Warne. The space becomes a tense nexus of corporate and military power, where the fate of Clancey and the LIZ 79 is decided.
Organizations Involved
Institutional presence and influence
The Space Corps is the driving force behind this event’s escalation, with General Hermack issuing the order to deploy the minnow fleet to destroy the LIZ 79. The organization’s authority is absolute, and its protocols demand the elimination of threats to argonite shipping lanes. Hermack’s order reflects the Space Corps’ zero-tolerance stance toward piracy and defiance, with no room for negotiation or mercy. The deployment of the minnow fleet symbolizes the full weight of the Space Corps’ military might being brought to bear on Clancey.
The Issigri Mining Corporation is indirectly involved in this event, as its resources—specifically Madeleine Issigri’s video channel and office—are repurposed by the Space Corps to issue the order to destroy the LIZ 79. While the corporation does not actively participate in the military decision, its passive compliance (e.g., Madeleine allowing Hermack to use her channel) reinforces the corporate-military alliance. The Issigri Mining Corporation’s involvement is symbolic, representing the blending of corporate and military interests in the pursuit of a common enemy.
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Key Dialogue
"HERMACK: Major Warne, can you hear me? I repeat, can you hear me?"
"WARNE [ON MONITOR]: Just about, sir."
"HERMACK: You let Clancey make a complete fool of you! Are you still tracking his ship?"
"WARNE [ON MONITOR]: No, sir. My radar and sonar screens are out of action."
"HERMACK: What?"
"WARNE [ON MONITOR]: Well, I can't sit here with just (static) I request assistance immediately, sir."
"HERMACK: (Transmission ends. Madeleine enters with a secretary.) Your request is noted."
"HERMACK: I mean to find out. May I monopolise your video channel a while longer?"
"MADELEINE: Well, of course."
"HERMACK: General Hermack to V forty one."
"PENN [ON MONITOR]: Yes, General."
"HERMACK: Ah, Penn. Did you pick up Major Warne's last report on your monitor?"
"PENN [ON MONITOR]: Some of it, sir. There was a lot of interference."
"HERMACK: Right. Now I want the rest of the minnow fleet launched and I want LIZ seventy nine found and destroyed. Is that understood?"
"PENN [ON MONITOR]: Yes, sir."
"HERMACK: (The Minnow fighters are launched.) Report back as soon as the Minnow fleet is clear. I am not giving Milo Clancey any more chances."