Susan defies Dalek control over Thal message
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Susan takes dictation from Dalek 2, writing a message seemingly offering food to the Thals in exchange for their help in re-cultivating the land.
The Daleks question Susan about writing her name on the message and whether she told the Thals she would do so; Susan argues on the Thals' behalf and requests to take the message to them, a request which Dalek 1 denies.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Conflict between compassion for the Thals and frustration at being manipulated by the Daleks. Surface-level compliance masks a growing defiance, particularly when she volunteers to deliver the message herself. Her emotional state is a mix of resigned frustration (at the Daleks' control) and determined empathy (for the Thals' plight).
Susan is physically present in the Dalek Control Room, seated and taking dictation from Dalek 2, her pen moving across the message as she transcribes the Daleks' deceptive offer of food and re-cultivation to the Thals. Her posture and tone shift as she defends the Thals, revealing her empathy and moral conflict. When Dalek 1 interrogates her about her name, she responds with quiet defiance, insisting on delivering the message herself—a subtle act of resistance. Her voice carries a mix of frustration and determination, especially when she asserts, 'They're very friendly people.'
- • To protect the Thals from Dalek deception by delivering the message herself (a subtle act of resistance).
- • To assert her autonomy by challenging Dalek 1’s authority, even if indirectly.
- • The Thals are trustworthy and deserve help, unlike the Daleks.
- • The Daleks cannot be trusted, and their 'generosity' is a trap.
Not directly observable, but inferred as desperate and hopeful (based on Susan’s advocacy) or susceptible to manipulation (based on the Daleks' plan). Their emotional state is a tension point in the scene, as their fate hangs in the balance of Susan’s defiance and the Daleks' control.
The Thals are not physically present in this scene but are central to the dialogue and subtext. Susan’s defense of them ('They're very friendly people') and her offer to deliver the message frame them as vulnerable but deserving of trust. The Daleks' deceptive message, however, positions the Thals as potential victims of Dalek manipulation. Their role in the scene is indirect but pivotal, as the entire exchange revolves around their starvation and the Daleks' exploitation of it.
- • To secure food for survival, potentially leading them into a Dalek trap.
- • To trust Susan’s message, unaware of its deceptive origins.
- • The Daleks' offer is genuine (if they knew the truth, they would reject it).
- • Susan is a reliable ally (based on her empathy).
Coldly dominant, with a hint of amused cruelty when mocking Susan’s name. Its emotional state is one of unshakable confidence in its plan, bordering on arrogance as it dismisses Susan’s pleas. The Dalek’s actions reflect calculated indifference to the suffering of both Susan and the Thals.
Dalek 1 dominates the scene from a position of authority, dictating the deceptive message to Susan and interrogating her about her name. Its cold, calculating tone underscores its manipulation of Susan and the Thals. When Susan defends the Thals, Dalek 1 dismisses her with a firm 'No,' reasserting Dalek control. The Dalek’s giggle at Susan’s name ('Su San') is a chilling reminder of its inhumanity and enjoyment of power. It also switches off the monitor mid-conversation between Ian, Barbara, and the Doctor, demonstrating its omniscience and disregard for their concerns.
- • To use Susan as a pawn to deceive the Thals into cooperating with the Daleks' re-cultivation plan.
- • To assert absolute control over Susan and the prisoners, reinforcing Dalek supremacy.
- • The Thals are weak and can be manipulated through false promises of food.
- • Susan and the other prisoners are expendable tools for Dalek objectives.
Emotionally detached, operating purely on Dalek protocol. Its state is one of cold efficiency, with no hint of empathy or doubt.
Dalek 2 serves as Dalek 1’s subordinate, dictating the deceptive message to Susan with clinical precision. Its role is functional and obedient, ensuring the message aligns with Dalek 1’s strategy. When it holds the message up for Dalek 1’s examination, it reinforces the Daleks' hierarchical control and collective ruthlessness. Its dialogue is mechanical and unemotional, reflecting its role as an extension of Dalek 1’s will.
- • To execute Dalek 1’s orders without deviation.
- • To ensure the deceptive message is flawless and authentic.
- • The Thals are inferior and can be manipulated without consequence.
- • Susan is a tool to be used, not a person with agency.
Cautiously optimistic, with an undercurrent of uncertainty. His emotional state is one of tentative hope, tempered by the reality of Dalek cruelty.
The Doctor’s voice is heard only through the monitor, speculating that the Daleks might release the prisoners ('Perhaps they're going to let us go. I don't know.'). His tone is uncertain but hopeful, reflecting his tendency to see possibilities where others see only danger. The Daleks' immediate shutdown of the monitor cuts off his speculation, highlighting their control over the situation.
- • To find a way out of the Daleks' control, even if it requires unconventional thinking.
- • To keep the group’s morale intact despite the dire circumstances.
- • The Daleks' actions may have unintended consequences that the group can exploit.
- • Escape is possible if they remain clever and united.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The deceptive message is the linchpin of the scene, serving as both a tactical tool for the Daleks and a moral dilemma for Susan. Drafted under Dalek coercion, it promises the Thals 'liquid foods, water in abundance, and fresh vegetables' in exchange for their help in re-cultivating the land—a false offer designed to lure the starving Thals into a trap. Susan’s name is strategically included to authenticate the message, exploiting her prior interactions with the Thals. The message’s physical existence (held up by Dalek 2 for inspection) symbolizes the Daleks' manipulative power and Susan’s forced complicity. Its delivery (or lack thereof) becomes a test of Susan’s defiance and the Thals' trust.
The Dalek Surveillance Monitor is a constant, oppressive presence in the Control Room, functioning as the Daleks' eyes and ears on the prisoners. During this event, it broadcasts Ian, Barbara, and the Doctor’s voices, allowing the Daleks to eavesdrop on their concerns (e.g., Ian’s question about Susan’s fate). The monitor’s sudden shutdown by Dalek 1 underscores the Daleks' total control over information flow, silencing the prisoners’ attempts to communicate or strategize. Its live feed of Susan’s interaction with the Daleks also serves as a psychological tool, reminding her (and the audience) that the Daleks are always watching. The monitor’s cold, clinical imagery (likely showing the prisoners’ distress) reinforces the Daleks' inhumanity and omniscience.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Dalek Control Room is the epicenter of Dalek power, a sterile, high-tech prison where Susan is forced to participate in the Daleks' deception. The humming metal floors (charged with static electricity) and flickering monitors create an oppressive, mechanized atmosphere, reinforcing the Daleks' cold authority. The surveillance screens display the prisoners’ pleading faces, while the rangescopes and consoles enable total control over Skaro. This location symbolizes institutionalized cruelty, where every action—from Susan’s writing to the Daleks' giggles—is calculated and monitored. The lack of natural light and the echoing Dalek voices amplify the isolation and helplessness of the prisoners, making the room feel like a trap with no escape.
Organizations Involved
Institutional presence and influence
The Thals are indirectly but critically involved in this event, as the entire deception revolves around their starvation and desperation. Though physically absent, their plight is the catalyst for the Daleks' manipulation of Susan. The false promise of food in the message is designed to exploit the Thals' vulnerability, making them potential victims of Dalek trickery. Susan’s defense of the Thals ('They're very friendly people') and her offer to deliver the message frame them as trusting but desperate, unaware of the Daleks' true intentions. Their future actions (whether to trust the message or not) will directly impact the narrative, as their cooperation could lead them into a Dalek trap.
The Daleks dominate this event through Dalek 1 and Dalek 2, who dictate the deceptive message, interrogate Susan, and assert their control over the situation. Their collective ruthlessness is on full display as they exploit Susan’s empathy for the Thals to manipulate a starving population. The Daleks' hierarchical structure (with Dalek 1 as the authority) ensures precision in their deception, while their surveillance tools (the monitor) allow them to silence dissent (e.g., shutting off Ian, Barbara, and the Doctor’s voices). This event highlights the Daleks' long-game strategy: using false promises to lure the Thals into a trap, thereby securing their own survival at the expense of others.
Narrative Connections
How this event relates to others in the story
"Alydon wants the Daleks to supply the Thals with food which then causes Susan to take dictation from Dalek 2, writing a message seemingly offering food to the Thals in exchange for their help in re-cultivating the land."
Daleks exploit Thal desperation with false treaty"Alydon wants the Daleks to supply the Thals with food which then causes Susan to take dictation from Dalek 2, writing a message seemingly offering food to the Thals in exchange for their help in re-cultivating the land."
Daleks manipulate Thals through false security"Susan writing a message offering food to the Thals is the message that Ganatus discovers by the city gates that informs Temmosus that the Daleks intend to help the Thals."
Thals debate Dalek offer and future"Susan writing a message offering food to the Thals is the message that Ganatus discovers by the city gates that informs Temmosus that the Daleks intend to help the Thals."
Susan’s message revives Thal hope"The Daleks question Susan about writing her name on the message. Alydon states the message must be signed 'Susan', which will signal authenticity.This emphasizes the manipulation involved."
Thals debate Dalek intentions and Susan’s trustworthiness"The Daleks question Susan about writing her name on the message. Alydon states the message must be signed 'Susan', which will signal authenticity.This emphasizes the manipulation involved."
Temmosus challenges Alydon’s trust in Susan"The Daleks question Susan about writing her name on the message. Alydon states the message must be signed 'Susan', which will signal authenticity.This emphasizes the manipulation involved."
Alydon reveals Susan’s capture and message planThemes This Exemplifies
Thematic resonance and meaning
Key Dialogue
"DALEK 1: What is the last word here? SUSAN: It's what I'm called. It's my name. Susan."
"SUSAN: We knew you could hear us, 'cause you knew about the Thals and the food. DALEK 1: It does not matter. We have the message now."
"SUSAN: Let me take the message to them. DALEK 1: No. SUSAN: Why not? DALEK 1: We have planned otherwise."