Susan’s message revives Thal hope
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Ganatus arrives with a message discovered by the city gates, which Temmosus reveals as a promise from Susan that the Daleks intend to help the Thals, which provides a renewed hope for the Thals' future.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Despairing → cautiously optimistic—Alydon’s initial hopelessness about the Thals’ future gives way to a fragile hope as he hears the message, but he remains acutely aware of the risks involved in trusting the Daleks.
Alydon listens intently as Temmosus reads Susan’s message, his expression shifting from despair to cautious optimism. He stands near Temmosus, his posture relaxing slightly as the message’s contents sink in. His reaction is one of quiet hope, tempered by the weight of their past struggles. He does not speak during this moment, but his body language suggests a willingness to embrace this new possibility, however uncertain it may be.
- • To find a way to secure food and safety for his people, even if it means aligning with their ancient enemies.
- • To ensure that the Thals do not let their past conflicts blind them to this opportunity for survival.
- • That the Thals’ survival depends on their ability to adapt and cooperate, even with those they have long feared.
- • That Susan’s message is a genuine offer of help, and that ignoring it would be a fatal mistake.
Compassionate and determined—she writes the message with the genuine desire to alleviate the Thals’ suffering, fully aware of the risks involved in trusting the Daleks.
Susan is indirectly present through her written message, which is discovered by Ganatus and read by Temmosus. The message is a plea for trust and cooperation, signed with her name as a gesture of authenticity. While she does not physically appear in this event, her words carry her empathy and urgency, acting as a bridge between the Thals and the Daleks. Her message is the catalyst for the Thals’ shift in morale, offering them a glimmer of hope in their darkest hour.
- • To convince the Thals that the Daleks’ offer is sincere, thereby securing their cooperation in the escape plan.
- • To provide the Thals with a reason to hope, even if that hope is fragile and uncertain.
- • That the Thals’ survival is worth the risk of trusting the Daleks, at least temporarily.
- • That her role as a mediator between the Thals and the Daleks is crucial to achieving a peaceful resolution.
Playfully detached, with a hint of underlying skepticism—she is more interested in the tangible (the dead Magneton) than the abstract (the Daleks’ offer), and her lack of engagement reflects her cautious nature.
Dyoni is present in the camp but does not actively participate in the discussion about Susan’s message. She stands slightly apart from the group, her attention divided between the conversation and the dead Magneton Ganatus brought back. Her body language is reserved, and she does not contribute to the debate, though her presence adds a layer of quiet tension to the scene. Her focus on the Magneton suggests a preference for practical, immediate concerns over the uncertain promises in the message.
- • To focus on immediate, practical solutions to their problems (e.g., recharging the hand lights) rather than uncertain promises.
- • To avoid getting swept up in the group’s shifting morale, preferring to wait and see how the situation develops.
- • That the Daleks’ offer is likely too good to be true, and that the Thals should proceed with caution.
- • That her role is to support the group’s practical needs, not to engage in strategic debates.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The Daleks’ synthetic food is mentioned in Susan’s message as a promised gift left in the entrance hall of their main building. Though not physically present in this event, the food looms large as a symbol of both hope and potential deception. Temmosus describes it as a quantity of sustenance produced via synthetic sunlight, framing it as a lifeline for the starving Thals. The mention of the food serves to heighten the stakes of the message, as the Thals must decide whether to trust the Daleks’ offer or risk starvation. The food’s absence in the scene makes its promise all the more tantalizing—and dangerous.
The dead Magneton, though not directly involved in the discussion about Susan’s message, serves as a symbolic counterpoint to the abstract hope offered by the note. Dyoni and Ganatus briefly reference it as a potential source of power for recharging their hand lights, grounding the scene in practical concerns. The Magneton’s metallic corpse glints dully in the alien light, a stark reminder of the Thals’ desperate circumstances and their reliance on scavenged resources. Its presence underscores the tension between immediate, tangible needs (like light and power) and the uncertain promise of Dalek aid.
Susan’s signed message is the linchpin of this event, serving as both a tangible object and a symbolic gesture of trust. Discovered by Ganatus at the city gates, the message is a handwritten note offering Dalek-provided synthetic food and cooperation in building a new world. Its contents are read aloud by Temmosus, who frames it as a genuine offer of aid. The message’s signature—Susan’s name—acts as a seal of authenticity, reassuring the Thals that it is not a Dalek forgery. Narratively, the message functions as a catalyst, shifting the Thals’ collective mindset from despair to cautious optimism and setting the stage for their eventual cooperation with the Daleks.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Thal camp outside the TARDIS is a makeshift haven of ragged shelters, where the survivors gather to debate their future. The camp is a space of desperation and exhaustion, but also of fragile hope, as the Thals cling to the possibility of survival. In this event, the camp becomes the stage for a pivotal shift in morale, as Temmosus reads Susan’s message aloud and the Thals begin to consider the Daleks’ offer. The camp’s atmosphere is one of quiet tension, as the group grapples with the implications of the message and the risks of trusting their ancient enemies. The TARDIS looms in the background, a silent witness to their struggle.
The city gates serve as a neutral ground where Susan’s message is left, acting as a symbolic threshold between the Thals’ camp and the Daleks’ stronghold. Ganatus discovers the message here, and its placement suggests a deliberate effort by the Daleks to communicate with the Thals without direct confrontation. The gates are a liminal space, neither fully Thal nor Dalek territory, making them an ideal location for a message that seeks to bridge the divide between the two groups. The gates’ role in this event is to facilitate communication and set the stage for the Thals’ decision to trust—or distrust—the Daleks’ offer.
Organizations Involved
Institutional presence and influence
The Thals are represented in this event through their collective reaction to Susan’s message, as well as the individual responses of Alydon, Temmosus, and Dyoni. As a group, they are starving and desperate, their survival hanging by a thread. The message offers them a glimmer of hope, but their internal divisions—between caution (Temmosus) and optimism (Alydon), between pragmatism (Dyoni) and idealism (Alydon)—are laid bare. The Thals’ involvement in this event is defined by their struggle to unite behind a shared course of action, even as they grapple with the risks of trusting the Daleks.
The prisoners (Susan and the Doctor’s companions) are represented in this event through Susan’s written message, which is discovered by Ganatus and read by Temmosus. The message serves as a bridge between the prisoners and the Thals, offering the Thals a glimmer of hope in their darkest hour. The prisoners’ involvement in this event is defined by their role as mediators, using their position as captives to negotiate with the Daleks and secure aid for the Thals. Their power lies in their ability to communicate with both the Thals and the Daleks, making them a crucial link in the fragile alliance being forged.
The Daleks are indirectly but powerfully present in this event through Susan’s message, which frames them as potential allies offering synthetic food and cooperation. The message’s contents—read aloud by Temmosus—paint the Daleks as a force for good, willing to work with the Thals to build a new world. However, the true nature of their intentions remains ambiguous, as the message could be a genuine offer of aid or a deceptive trap. The Daleks’ involvement in this event is defined by their manipulation of the Thals’ desperation, using Susan as a pawn to lure the Thals into a position of vulnerability.
Narrative Connections
How this event relates to others in the story
"Temmosus reveals they came due to the craft, confirming the city's inhabitation. Ganatus arrives with a message discovered by the city gates and they are both led to believe that the Daleks intend to help the Thals, which provides a renewed hope for the Thals' future because of the message."
Thals debate Dalek intentions and Susan’s trustworthiness"Temmosus reveals they came due to the craft, confirming the city's inhabitation. Ganatus arrives with a message discovered by the city gates and they are both led to believe that the Daleks intend to help the Thals, which provides a renewed hope for the Thals' future because of the message."
Temmosus challenges Alydon’s trust in Susan"Temmosus reveals they came due to the craft, confirming the city's inhabitation. Ganatus arrives with a message discovered by the city gates and they are both led to believe that the Daleks intend to help the Thals, which provides a renewed hope for the Thals' future because of the message."
Alydon reveals Susan’s capture and message plan"Susan writing a message offering food to the Thals is the message that Ganatus discovers by the city gates that informs Temmosus that the Daleks intend to help the Thals."
Susan defies Dalek control over Thal message"Susan writing a message offering food to the Thals is the message that Ganatus discovers by the city gates that informs Temmosus that the Daleks intend to help the Thals."
Daleks expose human emotional bondsKey Dialogue
"GANATUS: This was found at the city gates."
"TEMMOSUS: They're going to help us! It's signed by the girl, Susan. She says the Dalek people have no malice towards us, and they hope that they can work with us to build a new and safe world, free from the fear of war. They have the ability to produce food by means of synthetic sunlight, and they have left a quantity of it in the entrance hall of their main building. We are to collect it tomorrow. So there is a future for us."
"ALYDON: Suppose the Daleks refuse to help us. What then?"
"TEMMOSUS: I believe the Daleks hold the key to our future. Whatever that future may be, we must accept it gracefully and without regret."